Talk:Stella Nox Lucis Illuminati

Grammar
This is a good page, but as I was reading through it, I noticed some of the grammar was incorrect. Would the creator of the page (User:The6thMessenger) would mind if I did some revisions? MitsuSaire00 20:39, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you show your revisions first, and the changes made? Also unlike most pages here, i'm sorry to say that is NOT thoroughly made, most aspect of my character is thought out really carefuly, mainly because it's for story telling purposes, and i still can't make her sing for i don't speak or create lyrics in nihongo. But aside everything, thank you. The6thMessenger 00:57, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

No problem, I'll use the sandbox. I promise I WILL NOT change any concepts on the page, I just want to make it easier for English-speaking users to understand (I'm not saying it's impossible to understand, just that I have to read some things 2 or 3 times). I can probably start doing revisions sometime next week or the week after. MitsuSaire00 14:57, March 25, 2012 (UTC)