Thread:Kellysinaga/@comment-25445517-20150117153159/@comment-4718744-20150117155553

Not to offend you, but Yukina is a bit of a Mary-Sue. A character who is too perfect and has only little to no flaws.

Mary-Sues are (sorry to say this) horrible (described by some people) and being the "perfectionist" I don't like them.

To make your character not a Sue, just add some more character development and mistakes/flaws/fears to the character. Just saying.